The bat world

This week we have been learning how to create a piece of writing using a picture to help us.First we had a class brain storm on what the picture was about, then we brainstormed some adjectives. Finally we started our writing. I am sharing it with you, please leave a comment. Thanks! 

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A long time ago there were huge bats  they died because of the sun. The temperature burned them to the solid earth.. They have been there since 1999 in Japan. People have been coming to see what has been capable of what happened there. I smelled brain from there heads I heard the spirits going past the bats that have died. Nothing lives there because they will die,  if creatures die people will also die. I can taste the water from the ground. I see the burned bats in the forest. I feel the wind going past me. The bats look like dogs,  black as the night sky. There are about 100 bats in the forest of death. People come by just to see and what it looks like. Now it is not famous anymore because most people say it is just bats. But it is more than just bats  there are gods and rare bats that can never been found in life. NA KAEDEN