I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, July 2, 2019
My Name is Ruin
Hi my name is ruin.
I’m on a mission to find a tablet.
I’m in an old town.
The nature has taken over the town.
There are robots looking for me.
Story
Hi my name is ruin. I was in this city were the nature has takin over. Then I found a metal safe. Then I could not open it so I decided to throw out the window. I ran down the haven tower. Then kicked the metal safe and it opened up. I found what I was looking for? Then I heard something so I ran because it was the robot was chasing after me then I slid down the bridge on my futuristic motorbike. Then the robot started shooting at me but the robot keeped missing. Then the robot shoot mini robots. And I exploded them with dynamite. Then I had to kill the big robot so when he was in front of me I jump off my futuristic motorbike and killed the robot THE END
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Kia ora Kaeden.
ReplyDeleteYour story gave me a good picture in my head about what was happening with Ruin.You have used some good descriptive words and telling us about your futuristic bike gave me a giggle.
Can you please tell me why so many of you are talking about Ruin?.
Did Whaea Heather read a story about him?
yes miss Cassidy she showed a video and we had to right about it
ReplyDeletethank you for reading my ruin story!!!