the blue door

Hey kaeden here I have made a story about this blue door I have lots of interresting words.
can you please tell me if I have done mistakes or I could have pimped it up more, thankyou.

Magic city chapter 1 sneaking As I was walking down to the park when I noticed it wasn't there? How strange, it was a blue door. I really had a feeling to open it, so I did. It was “ohh” “step away from my door” your door! “Yeah” you can't prove it. “I can” well do it then. Police officers came to me, so I ran home. I was planning to get throw the blue door! This is the plan. Wait till midnight to get past the guards? Wonder the outside and get back before dawn? So that's the plan I really hope it works and what lays behind this door so siked about it. I was waiting till midnight. I sneaked out with snacks, water andeverything (just in case) “we need to keep an eye out for that kid!” “why” “why because he knows it’s here.” Chapter 2 Magic city I sneaked past the guards and few it was a close one, but for the black outfit l blended in with the dark. I opened the door and I felt like I was in a different world. I called it a magic city, there were a lot of different things, even magic things where flying,weird animals. It was so different, like I was meant to be here. I explored the land,and I found a house made with wood and hay. I saw a black hole, all of the animals hid so I hid as well. I got sucked in like a tornado coming towards you and I came outside the door and I went straight back in. There were no guards around so I was fine. I was so lucky to make it in before I got kicked out of this area.everything (just in case) “we need to keep an eye out for that kid!” “why” “why because he knows it’s here.” Chapter 3 Living I was trying to find the house,or should I say my house now. I found it, I wanted to find friends around here. I was searching in a jungle but not an ordinary junge a rainy jungle where it rains a lot. I found myself a monkey and bang ring ring ring “boss we have got him” I woke in a blacked out room,I heard a voice coming behind me it was a familiar voice.ohh it’s you the one in that building “yes you recognize my voice ahh boy” Yeah I do! “My name is Hiccup” My name is John,John cena. “Nice name John but you know you should have stayed out of this area but no you didn’t!” “You are going to regret it boy!” You wouldn't dare “I would look at these skulls'' what skulls? “Oh sorry” ahh disgusting turn the light’s off and where are you. “Never mind that'' ok gosh. SO MUCH BORING NIS LATER I slipped out and found the door and escaped. I ran and guards followed me down the pathway. I ran to my house and hid there and the guards went straight past me. Chapter 4 Escaping I needed to escape but it was loaded with guards around the place.I really need to get out or i'm a goner and my mum will call the police! And I will have to explain why I wasn’t home last night. I will be in my room for days. Why does it have to be that h..hard to get out of here? Here oops hide and the guards were searching and they left and he nearly got me. I got out before I was caught. I ran outside the door and I ran into my window and back into my bed. And it was Saturday morning I was still tired so I didn’t wake up until 3:00pm and I woke up had stuff to eat and drink and went straight to bed sunday morning everything was back to normal. See you guys later.