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Thursday, October 22, 2020

Alive

 Toby had thought the art gallery a boring place to visit. In fact, he had said as much to his mum as he trudged up the grand, stone steps to the entrance an hour earlier. “Mummmmm” he had complained, “I hate coming here. The animals never dooooo anything.”

Toby was now thinking he had been wrong. His jaw dropped and he stared in utter disbelief at the sight in front of him, pointing as water cascaded onto the floorboards from the painting containing a herd of elephants stampeding through the Ganges river. Toby could not believe his eyes: this trip was starting to get interesting… 


His mind was as dum as dumbo. He thought he was dreaming now but he wasn’t. So he pinched himself and it really was painful but he was not dreaming at all. He ran for his life. The whole gallery was coming alive so he had to get a move on. He saw his mum and he just left her and I ran to the nearest police station, and I reported it they even had to get the military into this action. 

There were some tanks and they just took the animals out of the way the jets had to take the birds and they took a while to take them down. After that I was waiting for a sign from a sergeant but no sign came up. I was worried!



My mother came out and she checked if I was ok and I asked her if “she was ok” and she said “yes”. There are millions of those animals so we had to make a hideout. After many days of construction it was finalized the current structure was phenomenal and tremindas. Thereafter I was in my bunker with other children that I did not recognize. I was anxious. It was finally sunrise furthermore I woke up happier than a dog running free. Thereafter I found my mum taking kids to gaze for me. I was howling to my mum, she gazed over her shoulder and was grinning and started darting towards me. I darted towards her as well, we hugged each other and then we went for breakfast. The navy was out looking for more creture’s I was waiting for the navy to come back and say that got them all. 


Time traveled along  day after day soldiers came back drained. The sun ripped through my dermis, as the balmy sun’s blazy shun upon me. Thereafter I was making best friends. Big news came up that the animals came alive because of me. I was saddened! My soul was taken away from me. 

   


It went down hill really  quickly the military found out that I had a wonderful ability that could mind control also the element. I would look at the painting and they would come real. Like a snake and panther came true he would bite into the painting then I could not control him anymore.

The military started to shot the humongous panther ripping through the tank  and air force. The panther finally took notice of the humans and chased them  downtown after a while the tanks took him down to the surface. The military was victorious.


3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Kaeden.
    You have used some great adjectives in this piece of writing.
    Did the teacher give you some words that you had to include in your work or is this all your own ideas?.
    I would like to have the power to make pictures come alive.I would look at a picture of a clydesdale so I could ride it at the beach.Do you know what a clydesdale is?.

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  2. Kia ora Kaeden.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.I can't wait to see your next learning post.

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  3. Kia ora Kaeden.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.I can't wait to see your next learning post.

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