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Friday, May 3, 2019

The bat world

This week we have been learning how to create a piece of writing using a picture to help us.First we had a class brain storm on what the picture was about, then we brainstormed some adjectives. Finally we started our writing. I am sharing it with you, please leave a comment. Thanks! 




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A long time ago there were huge bats  they died because of the sun. The temperature burned them to the solid earth.. They have been there since 1999 in Japan. People have been coming to see what has been capable of what happened there. I smelled brain from there heads I heard the spirits going past the bats that have died. Nothing lives there because they will die,  if creatures die people will also die. I can taste the water from the ground. I see the burned bats in the forest. I feel the wind going past me. The bats look like dogs,  black as the night sky. There are about 100 bats in the forest of death. People come by just to see and what it looks like. Now it is not famous anymore because most people say it is just bats. But it is more than just bats  there are gods and rare bats that can never been found in life. NA KAEDEN

Monday, February 18, 2019

Wanted Poster


WALT describe a character in our story.










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WALT use a picture prompt to write 100 words.

They warriors are having a war and the warriors they came back hurt.  Some warriors were fine coming back from the war the war was over in China. All China died because of the other country  killed them then they had peace, then China made new war people to attack and won the battle. the city dug them in the ground, and put flowers on them and China took over. And the China burnt the city and the army base, and the city people  got to the forest and said what to do and they had to kill them and build the city again and grow food again.


About me

WALT describe ourselves and what we are interested in.,

Kia ora  nau mai haere mai


My name is Kaeden I am a year 4 and my teacher is Whaea Heather
I enjoy playing with my friends I like ice cream and my favourite thing is KFC

I play sport on the weekend I do lots of chores and watch tv. I am in the bilingual class and I can speak te reo maori.