Kia ora,
The 100 word challenge is back and this is my best one yet hope you enjoy.
I was riding my rusted bike down the stoney pathway when out of nowhere I crashed into a haystack. I was stuck, I called out, I heard a ticking noise and it repeated. Immediately I thought “A bomb!”
I panicked and searched for it, but the more noise I made the closer the bomb came to exploding.
Terrified, heart racing I realsied I needed help immediately. I heard an engine crying out and realised
this could be my chance of escaping. The engine roared like a lion, unfortunately my cries were in vain.
The haystack exploded with me inside it.
Very creative writing Kaeden. Keep up the good mahi!
ReplyDeleteI am very impressed with your writing skills!!
ReplyDeleteWOW Kaeden...I LOVED the story and liked that you used some super words.I had to laugh when I read that the bale exploded with you inside it.I hope you are ok 👌and that you aren't too seriously hurt😩.
ReplyDeletekia ora kaeden I like how you use similes to pimp your writing and everything is amazing nothing else ka kite.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kaeden I really liked that you have actually sticked to your 100 words next time I think you should work on doing 200 words How long did this take you to do? Na mihi Jazaky.
ReplyDeletegreeting Kaeden i like your righting you are amazing at righting and i don't think you have anything to work on goodbye.
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